The Arc of Water ~*~ROTD~*~
I hold my breathslipping in between the earth and sand,burying my shoulders in wetnessthe foamy residue of wave unleashedin tresses freed; sea-weeds adornedthe crash of my heartwaiting for the seeping...
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Fine use of water's tide as love's metaphor, excellent work, adds a swelling dimension to your romantic sea change.
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Never felt so overwhelmed. After I threw my heart to the gulls, no one called or waited. Chris this is powerful. I'm glad you've got such strong arms, legs and lungs. Perhaps it's time you settle for...
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Wow! This is a powerful write, Chris. Love the metaphor!
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Chris I too loved your sea metaphor. As an aside it brought back vivid memories of the ocean for me. But your created a powerful tide of emotional surge which I could feel deep in my soul. The ending...
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there is a special way water can make us feel.. the pressure, the mesmerizing effect of the glassiness.. great piece of writing.. RB
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Expert swimmer and expert poem writer, much enjoyed.. Dan
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Exceptional writing, Chris; the current of your talent always is in high tide. :)
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